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Comrades at the Buffet Table

Che’s habit of hogging
all the seviche‘d shellfish
led Fidel to believe
that the man was selfish.
But that was not the reason
Castro and Guevara
Decided to say,
“Sayonara.”

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  • Damned Commies!!! lol no I like your humor you put in your poetry not very many people do that


  • just mercedes gold member
    January 2
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    This is great! Well done.

  • michaeline
    January 2

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    This is really cute.Liked the title.Was not at all what I was expecting.Great thoughts and the flow was good.


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    a very good giggle


  • poetrandy
    December 1, 2008
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    Fishy!

    Cute & Silly! Good luck in the contest!


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Good

    This is a wonderful poem about shadows, of our creation and our creator full of love and very well done, fellow poet Very enjoyable love nature poems. There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. Check out one of mines, I look forward to your next write

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