A tear on inside is as smell of your laughter,
arrested after time, you took away the breeze,
slide on pained faith in their letters when cry;
silently in soaked contrasts of shattered innocence.
Mute solo role, naked, falling chastity to pieces,
a melancholy raped, drowned bare of quiet symphony,
posing an absence of commitment without disinclination.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Picture Prompt
Picture Credit: "Weeping Nude" by Edvard Munch.
57 words
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie: Picture Prompt: 30-60 words. by chilali.
550 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
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Great words used. My favorite lines was this : "silently in soaked contrasts of shattered innocence."
^^ Beautiful. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
Much love
Ylova
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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drowned bare of symphony...i love the picture that speaks of, a lovely write here
C
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wonderful
this poem is a wonderful poem! i love it..
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wow, this is amazing
nicely done and good luck in the contest take care
Stephanie ♥
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