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I am back, again

 
Hello Miss. strict and caring nurse,
I am once again back to torture you,
Lying in my bed being all lazy and loud.
 
I enjoyed the catwash and the food,
All the yelling for not taking my pills,
And not to mention when you freaked out.
 
So here I am again for the last time,
But today I will be very nervous,
So don't mind me if I start yelling.
 
Now I am ill for real, listen up,
I am having a real surgery too,
And I want ice cream when I wake up.
 
So this time I won't stay way too long,
And I'll be nice to you this time too,
For now I am here of my own free will.
 
 

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Option: 2) Write me a poem about being ill, physical or mental and how you would feel or would behave oneself.

Last year I was brought to the hospital and stayed nearly a month there and well, I don't like taking pills and since they couldn't figure out what was wrong they kept me in bed. I have some fine memories form there and this nurse I am talking about in the poem was the leader and she was the only one I listened to when they wanted to take blood tests, feed me, pills, pill, and yes, more pills.
I don't like pills -_-'

So in two weeks I will go back to remove my tonsills and I hope she ain't all too mad at me for last time

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  • Warrior7
    December 4, 2008
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    Hey Merosa, this was a great little poem, shame on you for yelling at the nurse !!!! lol


  • Alyzeh
    December 3, 2008

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    Awww..this was sweet. Very very cute! Just like you Meroza! Good luck to you in the contest!

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    I think she will be nice on you..well..that means if it is a nurse by heart..

    I would be nice to you....so many people hate being in the hospital, taking pills, doing blood tests ans so on....

    I will be thinking about you over two weeks..and hope you get your icecream, lots of it....

    XXJeannette


    • Meroza
      December 2, 2008

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      naw, thank you for this cute comment. I sure do hope she won't bite my head off yeah, but the sexy, young doctor promised me ice so I guess I can rely on that


  • countrybabe gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Nice

    This is nicely written. I'm sure she has forgiven you a long time ago Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Countrybabe


  • catz Moderators member
    December 1, 2008

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    Hospitals...yuk... but many times they're a necessary evil. I was treated very nicely in the hospital in the two weeks I spent there a year ago when I had a stroke.

    Nobody offered me ice cream, though. All I got was bland food and pills. Oh well, maybe next time...

    This is a cute poem. Yep, they should definitly give you ice cream. I remember eating it when I was in the hospital about 67 years ago when I had my tonsils removed. But the meanies made me eat my oatmeal with just milk on it and I like brown sugar and butter with it.

    God luck in the contest

    Dee


    • Meroza
      December 2, 2008
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      Well, I made a huge fuzz about getting my ice cream so


  • badnovocaine
    December 1, 2008

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    Oh wow, I really liked this poem because I can relate, especially the part about Ice Cream. I guess if your in the hospital for so long the least they can do is give you Ice Cream right?
    That sounds like me when i had my tonsils taken out, that is actually the very first thing I did, even if I was really sick when I got out, could hardly stand.

    Aww I do agree with some of the comments below, I am sure if you show her this poem she wont be mad, anyways good poem I loved how you described what we feel when we are at the hospital. I think sometimes we all go through that, especially when they are feeding you pills

    Let me know how your surgery turns out, but you'll be fine, I want to hear from you though when you get out of surgery sometime after, so I know if you need cheering up!!!

    Anyways good poem, just think of Christmas time!

    • Meroza
      December 2, 2008
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      I can't eat the christmas dinner No fun thinking about christmas without the dinner, and I'll let you know as soon as I wake up. I will be taking my laptop with me

      • badnovocaine
        December 2, 2008
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        Yeah I didn't take into account that you couldn't eat the Christmas dinner, sorry to hear about that, I know I couldn't eat for like a week after I had my tonsils taken out
        It sucks but anyways let me know how it went.
        On a another note, you can have ice cream!!! Which is a perfectly good excuse


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 1, 2008

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    why am i not surprised, show her this poem when you go and i think she will forgive you, not every day a patient gives you a poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


    • Meroza
      December 2, 2008
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      I will keep that tough in mind, thansk brotehr


  • chilali
    December 1, 2008

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    Sooo cuute! I loved this Meroza! Good luck in the contest! Muah! Love you!


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Very cute, I don't think she will have to worry about your talking or yelling after your surgery.

    Well Done....Best wishes in the contest

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