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free within the confines

If we cut loose
more than debauchery
would be delivered

deserted would be ties
which anchor us to
recognizable affiliation

in short
we would die

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

prompt:
“No one is free, even the birds are chained to the sky.”
-Bob Dylan

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  • She Stole My Voice
    December 1, 2008

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    Wow.
    This is amazing.
    I don't even know what to say
    besides
    you might win.

    Thank you for entering ♥


    -Rainbow.