I really don’t like sweets
I always pass them by
why are you now laughing
have I something in my eye ?
Why should I look in a mirror ?
You say that you’ve got proof
you know I never eat them
is that Santa on the roof ?
Why did I change the subject ?
I don’t know what you mean
I've never even seen a sweet
Not a single jelly bean.
Oh alright if you insist
to the mirror I now go
I'll show you I don’t eat them.
OH MY GOD, OH NO, NO, NO !!
Author notes
Picture Prompt.
A contest entry
- Write a poem about the picture by BethanyBoo.
700 points, ended December 18, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great stuff!!!
Wonderful take on the prompt & so worthy of the shiney you be sporting...
Keep up the good work...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
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very funny. guilty as charged.
i really liked this poemand the border looks pretty. i always pretend i havnt eaten sweets when i have.
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Lol this is so cute! Caught with the evidence
Gorgeous poem with wonderful rhyme.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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This is perfect! If only you knew just how true to life this piece is! As the mother of the pictured darling, I have lost track of how many times I have had conversations like this with her!
Oh, Beth will love this! Thank you for entering her contest!
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Hahas, cute!! Good luck in the contest. Cheers!!
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