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dancing with the jester under moonlight to a serenade by the ocean


the tide
is like percussion

and i know he will either
die
or kill me
before the night is over

but no clinically insane love was ever good without
risk.


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prompt #1.
Arpeggio.

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  • Sonja
    December 3, 2008
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    Congratulations tinuelena for silver on this fine written poem.
    ~Sonja~


  • Harlequin Dance
    December 1, 2008
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    That's perfectly fine. Very nice poem, by the way! I like it. It's short but very descriptive.