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Did You

Tears run unchecked down my face
I turn towards the window, unseeing
Why did you leave me?
My best friend lost to me forever
Did you think of how much I would hurt,
Did you think of me at all?
Did you think of how alone I'd be
When you took my  only friend,
When you put that,
That gun against your head

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  • queen Moderators member
    December 2, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi anne-marie2010

    This is fantastic, the last line really hits home please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • usedandabused1024
    December 1, 2008
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    wow.

    this IS very heartbreaking. honey you need to get yourself our of your environment. you don't need to be suicidal, or hanging out with anyone suicidal. this is not healthy, and it will only bring you down. you get ONE life to live girl... live it all up before its taken away from you. nice work anyways =)


  • catz Moderators member
    December 1, 2008
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    This is so sad. I think that by the time a person reaches the point of suicide, they've become irrational and unthinking about what it can mean to those left behind.

    You've written a heartbreaking piece here, reflecting the pain of losing a friend in this manner.

    Dee