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My Christmas Eve

Here we are again
as cards and candy canes,
decorate our chimney.
The smell of turkey
mingling with cranberry sauce,
mouths watering
christmas cookies in the jar.
Mistletoe hanging
Just where we will step
Sweet tidings of joy,
swept around the neighborhood,
I find myself
singing "Silent Night"
as the holiday clatter
comes to an end.

Author notes

Cards, Candy Canes, Decorate (Decorations), Chimney, Turkey, Cranberry Sauce, Christmas Cookies, Mistletoe, Tidings, Holiday

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  • mmook
    December 23, 2008

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    bitter and sweet ... well done it conjure up so many image in my mind.... good luck..."Silent Night"
    as the holiday clatter
    comes to an end.


  • hugs and kissies
    December 21, 2008
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    nice thank you for entering the contest good luck

  • InBetweenThoughts
    December 13, 2008

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    Good evening Dragonbabyx3 the use of the wordbank was very creative giving the reader an exceptionally good view of the thoughts of your Holiday at hand Wonderful write, best wishes in the contest. Happy Holidays! Ken IBT


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    Very nicely done

    I like how you have cleverly used the given words, and managed for them to flow together without seeming "forced".

    Nicely done
    "Pick up the pen and never put it down again"
    ASM