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Happy Birthday Georgia & Malcolm!

Your hugs are warm and golden,
Your smiles like crystal gleam;
Your laughter sweetens sugar,
Like peaches and fresh cream.

You’ve grown up, like soft lilies,
Blooming before our eyes;
You’ll go so far, I know it,
You’ll soar through bluest skies!

The cake is in the oven,
The streamers bursting bright;
A great charade of colours,
What an exciting sight!

Georgia, you are so gorgeous,
A truly lovely girl;
Remember: keep on shining,
You are one pretty pearl!

Malcolm, you are a hero,
Happy, laughing and loud;
All action and adventure,
You always make us proud!

The morning birds are singing,
The happy sun does shine;
The Twins of joy and laughter,
The Twins so good and fine.

A Happy Birthday, sweet Twins!
Sing melody so true;
Keep smiling, laughing, sweet Twins!
We all love you for YOU.

A Happy Birthday to you,
Just remember always;
You’re special, don’t forget it -
May joy light all your days! 




Author notes

Happy Birthday Georgia and Malcolm!
Keep smiling . May your lives always be blessed with joy, happiness and peace!

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  • Going Forever
    December 6, 2008
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    this is a very good poem. Should it win Gold?

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    This is a really sweet wish blessings to you always good luck in their contest be well
    Have a great weekend.


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    This is truly beautiful...I love it and I know Georgia and Malcolm will too.

    Thank you so much!

    Annie


  • Autumn Rain13
    December 4, 2008

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    Aw, this is so sweet and beautiful... I am sure they will love it!!! best wishes in the contest!! this is one stunning write, I loved it!!!


  • Maylette
    December 4, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem! I really like the stanza about the cake in the oven - I could actually smell it cooking this is a lovely birthday poem and I'm sure it will be (or was) loved!

    ♦ M

  • Sunkissed xo
    December 1, 2008
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    As have you
    Merci! xx


  • Lady Michaella
    December 1, 2008
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    katie, this is stunningg! you truly have bloomed into an excelent writer!!
    wow
    xxxx

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