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Derailed

Death is prayed for
Crystalline silver memories
Savior
Inhibiting you from seeing
I am not an oddity
A value and a shape
Natural balance
But keep your heart
Life is utter chaos
Truer words have never been spoken

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  • oceanbluize
    December 1, 2008

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    I concur, truer words have never been spoken...this poem is awesome...You also possess the mighty gift of metaphorical writing...rarer it seems to come across these days...sublime write
    Much love and serenity, ocean.


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Ooo wow i like this one. This comes together nicly. Deffinetly like the "life is utter chaos" line. This worked out well thanks for entering and good luck :]