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Beyond lines of words there awaits a mysterious door
Offering your mind to take a leap into a new world,
Olden times scent arise from pages calling to explore
Kindling your imagination as you fall into its dream world,
Silently you enjoy an adventure while reality is ignored.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest with this poem I really like how you have shown how magical books can be - and this is a great acrostic, it took me a couple of read-throughs before I realised!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Siderea
    December 9, 2008

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    An acrostic with a palindrome word endings. Not only that , it makes sense. Some things are clever, others are well written, This poem is both.


  • WolfHeart
    December 8, 2008
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    A perfect description of reading. I like this very much!


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    December 7, 2008

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    Creative write crafted into an acrostic. This is well written and enjoyed the humorous observation in the final line! Well done!

    Dennis


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    December 7, 2008

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    Good Acrostic!

    This form is one of my favs & you did a fine job of defining what a book can be! Sure you'll do well in the Contest!


  • KayJay
    December 5, 2008
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    Bravo! What a wonderful take on books... Brilliantly done, dear...
    Ken

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