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The Beauty of Darkness

Sing me songs of beauty
Sir Machete,
only the walls keep leather secrets,
As I drag up pieces of memory
distant dreams, distressed and tattered
that snakes away around the sewers,
chasing the skeleton
of a riddle called life,
who are you dressed in silver moonlight?
A slow, happy smile, draws turning red.

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Prompt: 10 Step Masterpiece
I tired although It sounds weird to me, Nice challenge though

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  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Haha i think it came out really good. I like the line: "distant dreams, distressed and tattered" the best.. anyways thanks for entering and good luck.


    • badnovocaine
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment, I was worried it wasn't going to make sense, and some parts don't really make sense at all but oh well, its what the contest is about. Thanks for the comment you made me feel better about my write.