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Words of a Broken Mind

Please forgive me, i meant no harm
Mind of an unknown depression
A time of happiness for some, for me, just pain
The blood
Through the park, I saw you run
You smell
Interprit As You Wish
True love grows flowers
The broken heart
Thus the words of a broken mind

Author notes

Favourite line: you smell... lol!

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  • catalyst.
    December 7, 2008
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    'The broken heart
    Thus the words of a broken mind'
    loved those lines.


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Haha nice. I like the "you smell" part. I like this. I love the titel you came up with also. Thanks so much for entering and good luck :]