I've never thought
weeping willows
now
as I try to still the fear
holding me tight....
crushed by the relentless weight
my life
that's not
surely I can manage....to breathe deeper than this
or maybe, sleeping dogs should just be killed.
Author notes
Meh?
A contest entry
- 10 Step Masterpeice ~*~ by Brooklynn Tainted.
625 points, ended January 4, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a great job you did on this one! Something in this one... leaves me thinking. What a thought provoking piece!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
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Hey not bad, i like this. Lol the last line made me laugh. This is more for the writers to see where your writing goes and how you chalenge yourself. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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