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What is love?

All the girls I know

My only love

Untitled

You are the one that makes it complete

In just two short days I have gotten to know you more than any other girl I have known

I don't want to put a leash on love and call it my own, but I do want to call "you" my own

I said I loved you

Waiting for her man to fullfill her pleasures

In my life I thought I knew what love is, but until now I knew I was wrong about it

Only that special someone to bring me that love will be the one to fullfill my pleasures

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  • Yvette Champ gold member
    December 29, 2008
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  • Bob Fox
    December 10, 2008
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    Girls

    young, delicious and foolish. But oh the heart and body aches for theor flesh.


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Very good I like how you put this on the paper Very well done and good luck


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    "my only love; untitled" that is awesome how it came together like that!

    I think my poem turned out to be about having babies...lol. I never wrote a poem about having babies before!

  • GattonDweller
    December 1, 2008

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    haha it's weird... all your lines are about love... all mine are about suicide or depression

    anyway good write and good luck!


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Lol damn this came out pretty good. I deffinetly like this one... Might also be that i like some of those line. Thanks for entering and good luck :]

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