All the girls I know
My only love
Untitled
You are the one that makes it complete
In just two short days I have gotten to know you more than any other girl I have known
I don't want to put a leash on love and call it my own, but I do want to call "you" my own
I said I loved you
Waiting for her man to fullfill her pleasures
In my life I thought I knew what love is, but until now I knew I was wrong about it
Only that special someone to bring me that love will be the one to fullfill my pleasures
A contest entry
- 10 Step Masterpeice ~*~ by Brooklynn Tainted.
625 points, ended January 4, 50 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Girls
young, delicious and foolish. But oh the heart and body aches for theor flesh.
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Very good I like how you put this on the paper Very well done and good luck


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"my only love; untitled" that is awesome how it came together like that!

I think my poem turned out to be about having babies...lol. I never wrote a poem about having babies before!
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haha it's weird... all your lines are about love... all mine are about suicide or depression

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Lol damn this came out pretty good. I deffinetly like this one... Might also be that i like some of those line. Thanks for entering and good luck :]


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