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Floating Dreams

Kiss my dreams goodbye,
Each separate piece,
Floats it's separate way,
Into the dying wind.

A contest entry

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  • kill me gently
    August 29
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    Short and sweet.
    This poem was great.


  • MissSami
    December 2, 2008

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    Just a little sad, just a little melancholy... good job at the portrayal of emotion!

    Good luck in the contest!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    beautiful imagery good take on the prompt

    good luck