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A Dream

staring up at the clouds that arnt there anymore
laying on the hill that disappeared
falling asleep to the noise
waking to the silence

climbing the river
swimming on the mountain
flying on the road
driving in the sky

listing the the surrounding nature
feeling the warm grass beneath me
breathing the cool air
hearing a story from above

catch knowledge
release a tale
live a little
love a lot

Author notes

its about a dream i once had

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  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    December 6, 2008
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    i liked how everything was like the opposite... sweet.
    :]
    Bannaz


  • Ryan79
    December 1, 2008
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    Very calming and relaxing. Interesting dream. Great interpretation. Good poem.