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Wondering Memories

Cut the paper to the wind
releasing memories again
wonder who will see
and wonder

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    "releasing memories" beautiful

    great take on the prompt and good luck


  • Valley Girl silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Welcome to All Poetry

    You have said so much in so little words. One suggestion though, perhaps adding some punctuatuion may help the flow of this.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Sarah
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  • Joseph Hollis
    November 30, 2008

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    You've managed to tell a story in such few words. I imagined someone taking all of the notes that their love wrote to them and cutting them into tiny pieces to be scattered into the wind. Well done.