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Cleanse/Clean

fair wrappings cover

impure souls marching onward

towards high heaven

A contest entry

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  • Cat
    December 5, 2008

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    i like high heaven here.. it is unexpected and brings to mind more than the obvious.. a nice, condensed piece that has a lot of merit..
    nicely done

    m


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    this was so interesting!
    I was captured by the first line... your use of fair with wrappings is clever and imaginative!
    i loved the feeling to this of sinners making it to heaven too
    thank you for this great entry in our contest