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The Struggles Within

I feel like I have to show outside
A smile on my face for happiness
In order to hide from you the inside
That is screaming and tearing me apart.

And every moment you are with me
I pray you don't look into my eyes,
For I am afraid you might see through them
Into my world of despair.

It's a world I try to keep to myself
For the fear of pity you may feel for me.
The things I struggle with on the inside and out
Are the things I must resolve on my own.

I do not want to burden you
With all my struggles and my fears
In this life I have made
I have brought all this upon myself.

So I will keep this smile on my face
And hide you from my fears.
For you have problems of your own
That you too have to solve.

Author notes

#11-Fake smiles can only hide your tears for so long.

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  • Lagrimas
    December 7, 2008

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    Acceptance

    We do what we must to get through the days and nights before us. Nice write, thank you for sharing and good luck...


  • csmmoms2
    December 3, 2008
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    lovely

    You show heart and great promise. Welcome to AO, also thanks for reading Love is sightless. -c


  • upperworld06
    December 2, 2008
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    awesome, i definantly see that quote in this poem. good job and good luck


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Love your soft words and feelings here...The flow is beautiful....Keep penning in your style...Lovely!

    • ArtistTouch
      December 2, 2008
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      Thank you for your response and the applauds. These are somethings that I have been feeling for a while now and it was great to get them out.


  • penman gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    Wonderful

    very well done. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest

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