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Forever in my head~I still remember

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I remember ever moment
every face, every scream
I remember the children running
thinking, please let this be a dream

I remember the laughing
as they walked down the hall
the cell phones ringing
is this there last call

I remember crying
gun fire piercing the air
they fired with out looking
laughing without a care

I remember…….Silence
as the last one hit the floor
the officers were too late
and the children were no more

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This is still very much an emotional subject for me. Good luck to all who enter.

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  • NyteShade
    November 30, 2008

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    Wow this poem really hits you in the gut. It was very tragic that it had to happen...humans you never know which ones will crack. I love how this poem just takes a hold of you.
    Great write and Good Luck

    NS