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A friend

She changed her name
from Jamie to James
James to Jamie
A hundred thousand times

Confused
But never along
vulnerable
but I'll protect her.

My head was turned
A beat skipped
She was gone.

My sword wasn't sharp enough
My shield was made of Clay
I didn't do a job
that wasn't my job at all

the princess turned prince
is now beyond my reach
I'm no longer protect her
but I know she's not alone

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