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Pieces Of Our Lives

 

Blow In The Wind

 

Where They Land

 

Was Our Destiny

 

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By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ Meroza
Picture Prompt ~ Found on deviantart.com ~ In 15 Words Or Less [ 14 Used ]



Gold(2), Bronze, HM(2)

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  • beautiful quote, thank you for your entry


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 4
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Cool!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 22

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    I love the imagery in this short poem and the background goes so great with the image. Thanks for sharing your talent.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 22
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Cathy, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • that comes out as such an awesome quote i mean really wow! that just took away my breath

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 23
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you ever so much for the Bronze Trophy, but most of all, I am so happy you enjoyed my write.

      Thank You Again


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 10
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am very pleased you liked my write.



  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 8

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    This is such a wonderfully awsome poem, I loved it! I loved it! I love it! This is wonderfully written.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 9
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • ItaloEtkin
    April 6
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    fantastic! what i was looking for.

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 8
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Again

  • Wow. This IS gold. Thank you for this beautiful entry and good luck to you. This is very deep.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Spiritually expressive and deep.


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 31
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      Thank you very much for your beautiful comment.



  • TwilightDazzles
    January 15

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    This is beautiful, I am impressed with the impact of your words. A wonderful write for the picture Thanks for following the rules and for entering. Best wishes


  • songstress80
    January 6

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    congrats on the 2 gold trophies. all parts of your poem, the background, everything, just blends so well together making a glorious whole. kinda like all different people of the world make it beautiful. it's a masterpiece! short and sweet words that are truthful and should not be forgotten. it reminds us that everything we say and do leads up to our future goals and aspects to create a future good or bad (all depending on our actions). excellent job!!!


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 6
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am truely pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thank You Again

  • Brilliant!


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you very much for the great comment, I am pleased you liked my write.

      Thanks


  • doolie gold member
    January 2

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    These words are beautiful and feels so true. Your poem just blew me away. Another shinny . I'm so happy for you.
    Laura


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you for the beautiful comment and warm words.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    That they do. Such beautiful imagery here. I think what you have said is very true and expressive. Love the background as well.

    • Maxboy gold member
      January 2
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      !!! OH WOW !!!

      Thank you so very much for the Gold Trophy, but most of all, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write so much and thank you for your beautiful comment.

      Thanks Again


  • Beauty Of Silence
    December 11, 2008

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    wow wow wow!

    this was so simple, yet it was so beautifully crafted. you totally deserve the gold. congratz. this piece is just mindblowing


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 11, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Congrat's on the well deserved Gold! Fifteen words of magic and a story so strong...lovely write...
    thanks for sharing...
    mystic


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you very much Kim for all your support and kind words, they do mean a great deal to me.

      Love


  • daviscth silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Congrats on winning the golden cup. Your 15 words are great.


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you so much Cathy for the applause and kind words, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.



  • Venugopal gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    wonderful, congrats


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment.



  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Wow, what a beautiful thought. A wonderful write hunni, superbly penned. Love the BG to, matches well Good luck in the contest hunni


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am happy you liked it .



  • RatherImaginative silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    . . . and yet we may use our own breath to send them, if we've wit enough. Beautiful piece!


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you Carrie, I am pleased you liked it. [ How was my spelling this time ]



  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    I dunno if your talking about the same background anymore...but the one you have up now is beautiful I like it

    • Maxboy gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      !!! WOW !!! Catie Sheeran !!!

      Thank you so very much for the Gold Trophy, most of all, I am pleased you enjoyed my write so much. I can't tell you how much the approval of my writing means to me.

      Thanks Again
      Don

    • Maxboy gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      hahaha She lost me, she fixed it by deleating lines adding a line, but she is happy with this revised one. I couldn't tell the difference, but I don't know a thing about making backgrounds. I took her word for it, she swings a mean frying pan.



      • Catie Sheeran gold member
        December 1, 2008
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        well, it looks lovely now


        • Maxboy gold member
          December 1, 2008
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          I thought it did all along, but as you know, us guys don't see things the same way as you girls.



  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    oh, this is beautiful I do like this one

    good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you very much, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Meroza
    December 1, 2008

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    The background didn't look good at all, but the poem is great! Such a hidden meaning in the words. I adore it.
    But serusly, what an ugly background, ditch it!

    • Maxboy gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you for the applause and part of your comment, I am happy you liked my poem, but why don't you like your own background; I thought it was very nice.



      • Meroza
        December 3, 2008
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        The background is still horrible...But yeh, congrats on gold anyway


        • Maxboy gold member
          December 3, 2008
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          You are so picky, picky, picky. hahaha



  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    I love this one from you! This is so true hon and good luck in the contest


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you sweet candy girl, for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed it.


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