Alone, my soul burns, painfully, endlessly.
Together, love blurs the line between us, healing me.
Author notes
1. Pen me something beautiful in 10-15 words.
Something that will move my heart and soul.
Can be about anything you want!
A contest entry
- Simple Beauty by Sunkissed xo.
620 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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gaby u chin!!
Gaby u liittle chin! This is stunning,
so captiviating in such short words,
ur stunning in your writing
xoxox
u chin! -
Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that both of you love it.
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Woaaah.
Gaby - you have really outdone yourself this time.
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
So heartfelt and passionate, your words are a deep ocean of intensity and self-reflection, swallowing readers up whole in its icy depths! Wow. Great use of metaphor and symbolism! I love the way in which you describe your soul: "my soul burns, painfully, endlessly." Full of emotion and fire this is. I can really picture it all! This is a wonderful write, you are one of the site's top poets! Well done, thanks so much for entering, means a lot to me to read such a wonderful poem of yours
x
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this, my dear is brilliant!
so little words and so much meaning!
you are one skilled writer, keep up the brilliant work.
i dont know if what you do is inspired by your life, or how you feel or if its just things that come to mind. If it is about your feelings and your life,
cheer up i hope things get bettter
either way theyr all brillaint
xxx
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