There are earth and sky in disguise
to feel smell of hugs, the fire moaned
expanded reverse longings to revive life
unfolding passions in streaming aqua blues.
Kisses, sighs, desires and sequences,
in combination of flavor to an orgasm,
stays in my hopes of your hugs at the end,
in secret whispers to behold the agitations.
Forgives don't have words that can tell,
my ineffable passion to devour, to express
the joys covered by the index of azure rays,
leaving throbbing heart, naively crying for love.
Let me stay in a certainty of your return,
to feel your touches flourishing in satiation,
don't know at what moment, which precise location,
but knew, memories come over like a burning nostalgia.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Credit: http://dl4.glitter-graphics.net/pub/999/999734yqlbloeokb.jpg
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
1500 points, ended December 7, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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So finely written... I love the way how, along the poem, you turn from romantic to sensual, without being crude at all...
For some reason, this reminds me of those kind of relationships in which there's someone more attatched than the other person. The loved one might even be ignorant to such feeling... but the one who loves... that one is left with a ''throbing heart, naively crying for love''...
Very beautiful poem!
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