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Swept Away

There is a place where all dreams live
I go to watch from time to time
A place where all one's hopes and dreams
Are locked away within our mind

To my retreat I run in hope
I will soon escape this nightmare
A place where peace and gladness grow
And where the city sounds don't blare

Serenity and happiness
Inevitably find me here
My quiet thoughts conquer silence
And all my hopes and dreams appear

I admire them as they pass by
With such beauty and grace they all come
Each small childhood aspiration
And the realities they've become

A world of possibilities
Where I can do most anything
When limits are nonexistent
Where my mind is blossoming spring

I am sure to follow my dreams
To my haven I go each day
To look at each dream in wonder
As I'm silently swept away   

Author notes

This was an attempt at relaying where I go in my head when I write without actually writing about writing. I hope you like it!

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Comments

  • A-muse-in-writer
    December 29, 2008
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    Like it

    Very peaceful and lovely sounding. Thanks for sharing.


  • Topaze
    December 3, 2008
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    Very nicely done, my best wishes.


  • ShatterglassSecret
    December 1, 2008

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    you are inspired by dreams. your piece has the whirling, whimsical feel of a heart full of daydreams. i enjoyed your language choice and the simple joy you communicated through reflecting on such dreams. thank you for your entry.


  • Invisible 2 you
    November 30, 2008
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    oh, this was very nice. nice word choice too