I'm sending you...
Bubble gum dreams and jellybean screams,
Soft candy taffy to make you all laffy,
Choc'late delight to sail through the night,
Caramel corn hugs and peppermint shrugs!
Mix them and roll them and touch them with glee
and remember, dear poet, that they came from me!
A contest entry
- Bubble Gum Dreams by Sunshine Princess.
700 points, ended December 4, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ohh jellybeans, they are hard to get here, i have not seen them for ages, jelly babies are easy to get but not the beans
a good poem.
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you are just sweet!!!! I loved this!!!!!
Nice double rhyme
AWESOME!!!!
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Thank you for your happy comment on my Bubble Gum Dreams poem.
lol
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ah, this is nifty ~
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Oh if someone sent me all those lovely things, I guess i wouldn't forget any time soon. There is a lovely rhythm and bounce to this peace...makes it fun to read, and a very "sweet" poem.
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I like your poem thank you very much for writing for my contest have nice day
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Aww such a cute write, so short and adorable. Nothing more need be added. Well done and good luck
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I like this is is just so cute and fun I am sure that she will enjoy it good luck to you in her contest best wishes always be well.
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