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Bubblicious

 

 

Now for Christmas I offer you a special treat

some bubble gum made by Santa’s Elves,

so you can blow bubbles filled with wishes

and when they pop your they will come true.

 

He’ll put them in an enchanted glass jar

so you can feel them make you so happy,

they’ll magically be replaced

each time you take one away from inside.

 

That ways they will last all year long

bring you smiles each time you use them.

Oh they will come in so many tasty flavors,

including some you might never expect,

such as chocolate and vanilla ice cream,

oatmeal cookies and peanut butter,

banana split and pizza.

 

Just be sure in all your excitement

you don’t end up swallowing your gum

otherwise you might have bubble blowing

from the wrong place

like the people below.

 

 

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  • Sunshine Princess
    December 2, 2008
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    I think bubbles that can make wishes are nice thank you for writing for my contest have nice day


  • feetus
    December 1, 2008

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    *Laughs*
    Well done! A very light piece with a clever and humorous take on the prompt G'luck in the contest


  • TwilightDazzles
    December 1, 2008

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    Hahahahaha the ending had me laughing. Very well written as usual Best wishes in the contest


  • Scyphon
    December 1, 2008

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    This was a wonderful write, the bubble gum wishes is interesting. I like that, the end really had me laughing. Good luck in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Haha I Love this from the first line to the last and the las picture is just so funny good luck in her contest be well.


  • Olivias Violin
    November 30, 2008

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    "so you can blow bubbles filled with wishes
    and when they pop your they will come true."
    - this is wonderful

    and the picture is hysterical


  • Joseph Hollis
    November 30, 2008

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    Haha
    What a wonderfully lighthearted write. This one brought a smile to my face. The last stanza really tops it off.

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