In the sea of life,
Give yourself up to the wave
And float upon it.
Author notes
Sometimes in life all we can do is to "go with the flow"... remembering "for everything there is a season, and a time for every purpose under Heaven." Dedicated to my AP sister, Kim, aka Paloszoo: http://allpoetry.com/Paloszoo
In a list
A contest entry
- Calling all Favs of Paloszoo (contest) by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A Haiku For You
Comments
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Such a beautiful and inspiring haiku. I love it. The image you chose to go along with it is also impressive. I wish I had the fortitude to just float sometimes, but I'm a sinker
although fat does float. hehehe. Thank you so much for standing by my side during my crisis time.
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sometimes i just can't do that, but it sounds like a peaceful way to travel, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This is a great poem, it captures the intend to the contest, it really says a lot in a few words, what is left to say but as allways great job, blessings with love JOhn
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