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Color of love



Cut, cut, cut
Am I going nuts?
Here goes the seeping blood,
From my vein, from my heart
I am covered in my blood,
It's red! It's red!
Just like the color of love.
Am I finally being loved?

Oh shit, is this all my blood?
Damn, I'm bleeding out.
That's why I have to hurry up,
Cause the moment when I am being loved,
Fades away so far, so far....
I am no longer loved.
I am no longer alive.

Author notes

On the edge. And yes i have cut myself many times.

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  • Unforgiveable
    December 5, 2008
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    Wow, the emotion is fantastically portrayed.


  • September Daydreams
    December 1, 2008
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    Love - death-loneliness is portrayed really well in your lines.Keep it up !