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[ spring morning ]

spring morning
the first rose blooms
with the scent of red

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  • Draig aine gold member
    January 19
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    shivers

    I can smell th rose, a rich burgundy red with a hint of jasmin


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    "with the sent of red" very creative and beautiful good luck


  • McRae by nature
    November 30, 2008

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    I really like how you scented the color red.It was unexpected, and that always makes the best poems Beautiful.


    Carrie


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    thumbs up

    lovley