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I Miss You

I miss you
That's all I can really say
How much I wish I could be with you all the time
When I'm not near you, my heart cries
For anything
For a sight of you, a glimpse
I long to look into your eyes and kiss your skin
Whisper forbidden words
Into your hair
Tell you how much I care about you
How much I
Love you
How much I
Need you
I long to tell you how much
I miss you
When you're not here.

Author notes

For Skye. One of the best poems I've ever written, and one of my favorites too! Hope you guys like as well!

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  • kyuuketsuki ai
    November 30, 2008

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    Very nice, very freewrite, yet sculptured. I like how you interrupt thoughts in a way that isolates each idea, and intensifies it. Great. ^_^ <3 M. (PS. I WILL get back to you soon. Sorry, things have been super crazy here....)


    • Celticjedi
      November 30, 2008
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      That's okay Maria, I'm just glad to know you're alive. I've missed talking to you. Thank you for your support, as always. Love ya!

  • janetgriselle
    November 30, 2008

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    i totally hear you on this one :]

    the repetition, while I never would have encouraged it otherwise, works great here! I think that this is a very expressive poem that is simple, but sweet