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Breathing Bird

1)

A breathing bird flys,
a breathing bird dosnt know love


a breathing bird knows not of rights & wrongs

A breathing bird flys
a breathing bird dosnt know when to stop


a breathing bird sheds not one tear

a breathing bird flys
A breathing bird dosnt follow logic

A breathing bird dosnt know of hope.

A breathing bird flys
the breathing bird disapers!!!!


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2)
The void between time & space my soul lies
With a  heart of twisted paportions.

The void warps into a dark spiril of
lost peace and hope

swirling in to the hands of death
the smoke emergis cuting all oxygen!

Slowlly strangalling all life
escape nolonger is presant

a piosin breaking through the long built walls
tearing down all inossence left

spreading through the vains through life and time
the will is disapearing

slowlly decaying in to nothing
the cacoon of machurity covers the body

voices atack the berrior
noon succed but the prosses is still undone

the sun sett and the moons rise
to welcome the new days

the fight continues
the caccon emerges through the hardships

the hard shell cracks
awakaning the creature within

shining through the hard ships in time
the butterfly of lost hope flys freely

consued with happenis
radiating with love, hope and happeness.

Author notes

As you can tell there are 2 poems in here. I was to lazy to create another thing for the second one *sighs* lol
once again i know i have horible spelling. working on it.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    This is most interesting

    And listen so often I let my mind and fingers go through a story or poem in free flow .I dont stop to check spelling or punctuation untill I finnsh the work .Then I go back and check it out often not at the same moment . Yes I get words backwards sometimes but I get them edited within a day or two .N ot to worry for to stop for every little thing you lose the muse just write freeely and correct later you will be amazed


  • Kaus Lizzy
    November 30, 2008
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    The last line take out and happeness. opps lol