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Duet

Missing image

Hidden personality occupies
beast with many faces.
My ugly days with an attitude.

Times when sweetness is a veneer
peels off quickly revealing
reality covered with makeup.

Split two ways exposing
wrong side of life…

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Picture credits http://michaelo.deviantart.com/art/Skin-Deep-102403749


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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    this is my favorite line, this one stood out to me big time
    "My ugly days with an attitude." The imagery that you've got within this poem is good. I really like it.. great take on the prompt.

    good luck
    kat