Whilst azure clouds eclipse the moon,
brilliant glows sprinkle upon the earth.
In this moment magical creatures spawn,
titillating senses with their beauty.
Iridescent wings grow upon those
bathing in awakening mystical waters.
Her allegiance to the ivory crescent,
whispering beauty's song to the heavens.
As the clouds reveal the moon once more,
the evidence remains of this enchantment;
the divine fairy birthed from lake's canvas.
Author notes
Prompt: http://dl4.glitter-graphics.net/pub/999/999734yqlbloeokb.jpg
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A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
1500 points, ended December 7, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please leave CONSTRUCTIVE criticism :)
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Bravo! and congratulations, as well, on the gold.
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Thank you very much
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Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest
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Thank you so very much for the honor of gold!! This was a wonderful contest and I really appreciate it
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This is amazingly beautiful. It holds so many different thoughts yet one soft flow. I love reads like this because you can take it however you want. Well done and good luck.
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