Our love used to be a raging flame,
kept alive with tender care.
But now it's dying, who's to blame?
The failure of a sweet affair.
I kept this love burning for years,
but now, i fear it's sad end nears.
All your actions could only hinder
and so our love dies to cinders.
So answer me this before I stop trying:
All these years, have you been lying?
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (C) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Absolutely wonderuflly done. It flows beautifully, is full of heart and the honest feel to it just makes my heart ache.
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Very deep and profound. The ultimate question, too. I loved it. Thank you for the comment.
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