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Imagination Bubblegum

We dance around in circles,
our hands intertwined with love,
chanting:
"Pink grass,

pink trees,

purple skies,

bubblegum flavor cotton candy clouds,

colorful gumballs for rain,

bubblicious bushes."

As the worlds spins around us,
in a quick blurr,
the scene dissolves into,
the land of our imaginations.

 

We come to a dizzy halt,

collapsing on the now pale pink ground,

laughing and out of breath.

On our backs we lay on the grass,

watching the purple sky,

and cotton candy clouds float by,

finding delicious shapes within them.

 

Soon it's raining colorful gumballs,

and we run to try to catch as many as,

we can in our mouths.

Our cheeks puckered out like a monkey,

overly filled and lumpy.

 

Carefully we chew each gumball at a time,

savoring each sweet flavor,

and within time we have a large wad of gum,

in our mouths,

that we contendly chew.

 

We run around,

playing hide and seek,

behind bright pink trees,

and grabbing more gum,

from the bubblicious bushes and flowers.

 

All to soon it's time go,

we link hands again,

chanting:

"Pop went the bubble of gum."

 

The world dissolves yet again,

and we are back to the field of flowers,

where anything is possible,

with just a little imagination.

 

 

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  • my.stars.dont.shine
    December 5, 2008

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    Wow. I think you'll have to start writing me imagination worlds that I can fall into when I'm tired of reality. =) Just kidding. This is amazing sissy, its like your really there. Good luck in the contest. Love you.


  • Rovingone gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    Such a sweet collision of sights and senses. You draw a picture that is so easy to become a part of. Like dancing through the poem with your eyes and imagination.

  • Sunshine Princess
    December 4, 2008

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    I like your poem it is very nice thank you for writing for me have a nice day

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Awww This is really sweet she has been waiting for your poem to be on lol she will be thrilled thanks for sharing good luck in her contest be well.