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Haiku 167

on this spring morning
in the shade of mount fuji
all seems fresh and clean

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  • DogFish silver member
    December 13, 2008
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    ...fresh , clean poem!


    • Shenton silver member
      December 13, 2008
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      Dogfish

      Thankyou for reading, commenting and for your applause.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    ah, this is beautiful and refreshing

    good luck


    • Shenton silver member
      December 1, 2008
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      CathrynAnn

      Thankyou for reading and commenting, and for your good wishes.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • McRae by nature
    November 30, 2008
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    Very nice haiku I like the brightness and the imagery in the write.

    Carrie


    • Shenton silver member
      December 1, 2008
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      Carrie

      Thankyou for reading and commenting.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton

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