All pain and heartbreak
for as far as i can see
the night is cold and black
just like i have come to be.
Is there any chance
this heart can be cured
killing me faster
with each and every word
I go to the cabinet
and find all the pills
your keeping me alive
against my will.
Shes left me once more
my heart cannot take it
i always say i love you
and you always fake it..
But only when i rest in eternity
will i be in peace
ill only be happy
when im deceased.
idk
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=[[[[[[[ this better not be true, boy.
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Love love the second stanza. Expressive.
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that was a sad poem, but it was good to. there was a lot of...feeling in it.
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I love this. The emotion was real. The imagery was great. You really brought out some good things. Great job!
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nice..
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It makes me want to cry. I know the heartbreak.
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hmm, depressing. Ive felt like this before, quite alot actually. Don't let it get you down mate, things will get better
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This was very depressing indeed.....and your heart may be broken but it will slowly mend itself, don't choose the quickest way out...things will get better. I"m alone and I'm still going, show people you won't quit
Much love and concern ♥Rhi
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D: this is really depressing but really well written.
~Hayley Mae~
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