Diary’s torn pages
of dreams ripped from mind,
tossed on forgiveness winds,
writing life instead.
Author notes
15 words
Please credit pic ~ from deviantart.com
A contest entry
- 15 words or less ~ picture prompt by Catie Sheeran.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the bronze win brother.
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This is awesome!!!! I love your use of the word limit. Good luck...
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Excellent!!!
I love this.
Great take on the pic prompt.
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hm.
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oh, this is very creative and profound...lovely take on the prompt...I like "Diary's torn pages of dreams ripped from mind....writing life instead"
good luck
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very nice
This is another way to put this picture. I like the idea. Good luck in the contest. The Shaker
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This was done so well here and I enjoyed this! Good luck in the contest
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wow
excellent poem
good take on the prompt
your words are wonderful expressions of what is going on in the pic -
Nice take, the shreds of a diary being tossed to the wind. Forgiving yourself for past mistakes and moving on ~ something we can all learn from.
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I really liked your take on the picture.
Great write
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