i gave up my passions just to make you happy.
i dont care if you didnt realize.
i just hope you soon will.
i gave up everything ive know to believe you.
i dont care if your lieing.
i just hope soon you will stop.
i gave up all i had so you have more.
i dont care if you do not appreciate it.
i just hope you'll realize what im doing.
im giving up my life for u...
A contest entry
- These Feelings I Feel by Lagrimas.
563 points, ended December 7, 2008, 16 entries
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im not to great but what do u think?
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You do so much for it, and end up loosing so much of yourself to it. Good write, thank you and good luck. -
honestly i love it!
ha jst on the 3 from last line you havr i gave up gave up
so yeahh besides tht its good!
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honestly, in all of my opinion, this is a speechless kind of writing ....just mostly on your point of view.
i take this seriously.. in case you didnt know.
i love you. -
To be honest. The whole thing is my favourite part and to me, there is not least fav part. I seriously have nothing to say except for, WOW
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