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Kisses to the Wind

Missing image

Wishes

casted carelessly
like kisses to the wind

 

shall fall

 

like confetti
upon destinations

 

unknown.

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Photo prompt, deviantart.com
15 words or less

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    ooo..this is beautiful I really like the first stanza and the last 3 lines...great take on the prompt

    Good Luck


  • Shakes-spear
    December 1, 2008

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    Very nice

    I wrote my poem before reading all the entries but one. I really like where you went with this. Mine is on the same train of thought. Good luck in the contest! The Shaker

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Awww this is really really sweet I love the first three lines the middle two are cute nice job good luck in the contest be well.


  • sense surreal
    December 1, 2008

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    amazing! I admire your ability to see beyond the picture
    and create beautiful thoughts such as this... as for me,
    I can only see what I see


    like cofetti
    upon destinations

    unknown


    Anna Lee


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    This is beautiful


  • penman gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.

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