Ah the trickery of love
A funny thing indeed
Where your inner heart lies
Noone can see
But you look and know its time to cry
For your heart has fallen
Fallen so deep
You are way too far beyond reach
One thing is stopping you
One thing is stoppnig him
What they don't see behind scenes
Are the ring marks and the kids.
Your morals are the only thing that keep you away
Cheating is not your thing
Make a decision and make it quick
For your timer is running thin
Its not like you were handpicked
I tell you me or her, the kids can go both ways
I have a place, where you can all three stay
The past hurts bad
Knowing you for 5 years is nothing but fate
You say leaving me was your
And I quote "Only and biggest mistake"
The sand runs low
As my patience does too
Me or her
Your option lies
I can't wait on you untill the day I die...
Author notes
I know its not my best but I felt like writing about it might help me out some.
A contest entry
- The temptations of life by annesall235.
425 points, ended December 10, 2008, 25 entries
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With the extra work you put into it all I can say is GREAT!! the little tweaks here and there really do help bring the emphasis out on the seperate parts, good work
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Two things that I want to say,
One: the whole reason I write (good or not) is to try and make some sence of it all, I love the fact that you did write something very personal and real
Two: I am moving you in to the finalists list because the sheer reality of it is overpowering (in a good way) the only things i can recomend now is possably add some extra lines i love your details add more! and check the form, this could easily be turned from a good write to and amazing one
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