Shattered dreams from infant stage,
and no hugs from loving arms reassure;
this is what happens time and time again.
Minuscule dents appear,
tears are shedding -
can't find hope's ambition
Close my eyes;
nightmares
goodbye.
Author notes
35 Words
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
725 points, ended December 12, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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I really love your take on the prompt. the imagery within this poem is vivid and I really like the 3 lines a lot.
good luck
kat
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