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Slippery Slopes - HM

Missing image


Water totters, newly,
after being raised high, like child
in arms
swung up and dropped down

and spilling over

and down

down chisel-cliff
of mountains of new ideas

down slither of slide
with plunge-deep prickles

down gullies and gradations

clutching bits of what held
and then did not

only to plunge

gasping and gyrating for life
in small pools of wonder

that coddle courage
until it breast strokes away

as it should



Author notes

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  • Denerica
    December 9, 2008
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    Creative and interesting. Blessings.


  • TwilightDazzles
    December 7, 2008

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    Beautifully written! A very creative write on the picture. Congratulations on the HM


  • penman gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 7, 2008
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      ty, pen friend. I appreciate the challenge to get writing again...and the HM.