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Love and Affection

When love generates
unbearable heat
and when body enacts
a fuming  feat,
the only  amicable solution
to make it cool, is
to rinse
the five feet  and a few inches personality
more thoroughly
under showers of water falls
and dry it up
with springing affection

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  • penman gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    So beautiful are your words my cordial friend.You write with the passion of your heart, and this can always be felt by the reader as they read your beauitful words.
    I wish you all the best in the contest my sweet friend, and send much love and happiness to you also.
    ~Angel-anne~