There is nothing better in this world to see,
Than the look of a child's eyes shining bright.
It is a wondrous time to be so young and free,
For a child sees things in a different light.
Pretending to be whatever they want to be,
For with innocence and imagination things are just right.
With candy coated kisses on our checks is the key,
And honey dipped hugs are a special delight.
For there is nothing better in this world to see,
Than the look of a child's eyes shinning bright.
A contest entry
- Write a poem about the picture by BethanyBoo.
700 points, ended December 18, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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My mummy likes tihs poem becouse she says it is just how she feels about me. I like this poem too. It is relly sweet. Thank you for entering my competition.
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Wonderful Poem
This is such an amazing Childs poem it is so well written and wonderfully done good work and good luck.
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~Sweet~
Aww, thats cute** I like it very much...
~ Cheeks~
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There is nothing better in this world to see,
Than the look of a child's eyes shining bright.
It is a wondrous time to be so young and free,
For a child sees things in a different light.
Pretending to be whatever they want to be,
For with innocence and imagination things are just right.
With candy coated kisses on our checks is the key,
And honey dipped hugs are a special delight.
For there is nothing better in this world to see,
Than the look of a child's eyes shinning bright.
I am glad you liked it, I was rewriting it to this when I happen to see your comment. So here is the rewriteth and I will leave the orginal in contest.
Thanks for the comment.
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awwww! This is so lovely! Beth will adore it, Im sure! (Im her mummy, by the way!
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This is a wonderful piece, that she will enjoy reading, just as I did.
Thankyou for entering her contest!
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