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love always happens

you know it always happens
you cannot ever stop this
you can try but you will always fail
there will always be first loves
and first heartbreaks
you cant hide from this
it will always find you
love has its ways of getting into your life
it can take time..or it can happen among the days
you will never know untill after it hits you
love is powerful
love always happens

A contest entry

im not to great but what do u think?

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  • Rhythm Child
    December 2, 2008

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    A great entry

    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • xo.
    November 30, 2008
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    whoa! really good! idk why u think u write bad peoms thr really good!


  • jaiadoretu.
    November 30, 2008

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    Wow, fantastic write! No joke, its true. You can fall in and out of love, and eventually with time, you can get your heart broken. Such a powerful write.


  • xXbeautifuldisaster
    November 30, 2008
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    know what?
    i love you :0
    good way of ending too =)
    aha good job=]


  • samantha jean
    November 30, 2008
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    I love your title.
    I also like that is is repeated as your last line.
    Good write.

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