There's peace here
Amid the hum of a thousand colours.
The secure uncertenty
Of the surrounding, quivering lights.
I could be anywhere,
Everywhere,
Nowhere.
In this sanctury I can pretend you
When reality denies you.
Please come with me
The butterflies will keep our secret
Author notes
Option 1A - White Horse
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Comments
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love the sutble nuances of this...nice and smooth like soft serve ice cream...butterflies are magical creatures...when used in poetry one can't help but be pulled in by thier romantic allure...thanks for sharing...good luck with the contest...
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amazing job with this piece and how you gave such imagery and symbolism
great work and thanks for entering -
This poem is wonderful. Its so beautiful and almost breathless. I love it to death really. Butterflies are one of my favorite subjects for poetry. thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece.
cassie
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This is a very beautiful poem, could you please let me know which prompt it goes with? Thanks for entering and good luck.
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its for the song promt White horse. i'v put it in my AN now
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this is beautiful
uncertenty is that suppose to be uncertainity
butterflies are a great piece to write about
I write ideas about butterflies
yes they are attracted to light
you can read my poem Wings of a butterfly
if it is on here
it is the beginning of a great idea
this is fine for contest but later you can write more about this same thought
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Oh, why do the butterflies play with our lives?
This was a nice little surprise. So glad I clicked on it.
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