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Waxy White Wonder. (Hay(na)ku)

Gardenia
Sight delight
Sweet scent sensation

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Prompt. White.

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  • Cat
    December 7, 2008
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    a lovely, skilled use of alliteration
    nicely done

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  • LeonLiondas
    December 2, 2008
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    Beautiful !


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    there is a gardenia bush outside my house...
    how i adore the scent and loved how you captured the feel/texture within the title.
    this was a lovely write and I do so appreciate you taking the time to enter it into our contest!
    I really enjoyed your take on the prompt